Introduction

Need animation and video to tie into commercial

Scene 1

Scene 2

Hands and arms are a bit stiff. Will should follow through a bit more when he throws the cans.

Smooth out the camera move from the cart to the dumpster. It should be one fluid motion.

As Will walks out of scene two, animate it until the shadow has left the shot.

Scene 3

Camera turn needs to blend a bit. Ease out on the camera. As it turns, come into Will a bit.

The trash can. I think it has been fixed however

At the "Get out of…" can we do a little warping on the image… instead of a straight cut, we should either do a really quick dissolve, or blend.

Scene 4

Don’t we have more footage of Will pan handling… it would help.

The switch from Video to CG should occur during Will’s monologue, not after. His speech ties the two together.

The camera really flies around. I assume that is for the clock chime. Let’s dump the clock chime and just have the camera sweep around Will from the long shot to a medium shot. The medium shot should be close to the angle that the next video starts out in.

The building is on the wrong side

We need some bushes on the corner so it matches the corner Will runs into Melissa at.

Scene 5

We need CG of Will looking at Melissa for "With pleasure my dear!" The collision should be the signal to change to CG, and then that CG should go straight into Will’s view as he walks down the street.

As Will is walking down the street, we need to see the construction workers approaching him and Will colliding into them.

The second construction worker should not have a hat on in CG

Scene 6

Where did it go?

Scene 7

No jump cut. We need CG of Will’s POV, sideways camera looking at a one so he can say "I’m sorry… I recycle." Etc.

At the crash, can we cut the frames of video where Will is standing waiting for the cart to hit him?

Scene 8

Where does the tuna can go when Will gets out of the dumpster?

We need more CG of the thugs walking for the section in the freeze

Can is lost in the wall

Scene 8-9 transition

That needs to be smoother. Have Scott do the can movement, Chris, you get the background for the TV studio.