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Concept Design and Storyboarding
APCG 117 Spring 2006
Final Critique
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Slidecage Script    Post-Traumatic Slide Syndrome Script    Requiem Script    Prince of Wails Script    El Sid Script    Other   
Final Critique
Final:
  
TitleFinal Critique
Due DateWednesday 17 May 2006 by 1:50 pm
Points3 (3 out of 20 of your final)
PreparationThe semester
VenueDuring final period in lab (OCNL 241 and OCNL 251)
ConnectionIndividual
Turn-in MethodTurn-in spreadsheet by end of final period
FormatSpreadsheet
Subject LineN/A
File NameFinalCritique_your_name
NotesI am looking for honest appraisal not gratuitous accolades. This critique is a writing assignment as well as an evaluation. Use complete sentences when called for with correct grammar and spelling.
Task

You must critique both the shot selection by the director as well as the storyboards by the artist (also the director in this case). Please review each of your assigned projects and with due diligence consider each project and critique the shot selection and the storyboard. Remember the director has the responsibility to select the best shots to convey the story and the emotions, and importantly for a teaser to hook the audience. The storyboard artist has the duty to convey the shots - camera information, movements, emotions, continuity, etc., thus carefully review the storyboards and comment on them.

Critique form: FinalCritique_yourname.xls
 

Slidecage ScriptTop of Page

ReviewerProjects to review
Yun-Han ChinYun-Han ChinJacob PaulosAndy LongEdgar Miranda
Jacob PaulosJacob PaulosAndy LongEdgar MirandaRoya Shams
Andy LongAndy LongEdgar MirandaRoya ShamsBrandon Lester
Edgar MirandaEdgar MirandaRoya ShamsBrandon LesterKate Stoddard
Roya ShamsYun-Han ChinRoya ShamsBrandon LesterKate Stoddard
Brandon LesterYun-Han ChinJacob PaulosBrandon LesterKate Stoddard
Kate StoddardYun-Han ChinJacob PaulosAndy LongKate Stoddard

Post-Traumatic Slide Syndrome ScriptTop of Page

ReviewerProjects to review
Scott WilhelmScott WilhelmDenielle BonaseraKurt FeudaleJi Her
Denielle BonaseraDenielle BonaseraKurt FeudaleJi HerAndrew Holifield
Kurt FeudaleKurt FeudaleJi HerAndrew HolifieldBrady Kennedy
Ji HerJi HerAndrew HolifieldBrady KennedyMatthew Nighswander
Andrew HolifieldAndrew HolifieldBrady KennedyMatthew NighswanderKatie Walker
Brady KennedyBrady KennedyMatthew NighswanderKatie WalkerBrandon Bass
Matthew NighswanderMatthew NighswanderKatie WalkerBrandon BassDavid Winston
Katie WalkerKatie WalkerBrandon BassDavid WinstonJason Young
Brandon BassScott WilhelmBrandon BassDavid WinstonJason Young
David WinstonScott WilhelmDenielle BonaseraDavid WinstonJason Young
Jason YoungScott WilhelmDenielle BonaseraKurt FeudaleJason Young

Requiem ScriptTop of Page

ReviewerProjects to review
Reyna ArzolaReyna ArzolaDavid ClishBrandon CoomesRyan Crangle
David ClishDavid ClishBrandon CoomesRyan CrangleRaul Damian
Brandon CoomesBrandon CoomesRyan CrangleRaul DamianChristopher Maggitti
Ryan CrangleRyan CrangleRaul DamianChristopher MaggittiAyla Richards
Raul DamianReyna ArzolaRaul DamianChristopher MaggittiAyla Richards
Christopher MaggittiReyna ArzolaDavid ClishChristopher MaggittiAyla Richards
Ayla RichardsReyna ArzolaDavid ClishBrandon CoomesAyla Richards

Prince of Wails ScriptTop of Page

ReviewerProjects to review
Christopher ColtonChristopher ColtonMichael DemetriouStephen MunozTimothy Thao
Michael DemetriouChristopher ColtonMichael DemetriouStephen MunozTimothy Thao
Stephen MunozChristopher ColtonMichael DemetriouStephen MunozTimothy Thao
Timothy ThaoChristopher ColtonMichael DemetriouStephen MunozTimothy Thao

El Sid ScriptTop of Page

ReviewerProjects to review
Steve BeyersSteve BeyersDanwing HeinzGerry MaganaDaniel McGuire
Danwing HeinzDanny MurrayDanwing HeinzGerry MaganaDaniel McGuire
Gerry MaganaDanny MurrayEvan WooleryGerry MaganaDaniel McGuire
Daniel McGuireSteve BeyersEvan WooleryGerry MaganaDaniel McGuire
Danny MurraySteve BeyersDanwing HeinzDanny MurrayEvan Woolery
Evan WoolerySteve BeyersDanwing HeinzDanny MurrayEvan Woolery

OtherTop of Page

If your name does not appear in any of the lists, you did not present and thus I do not have your work. Please ask the instructor for which grouping you are assigned to critique.